Genesis Revelation
‘Let there be light, and there was light’.
Every light that
was ever lit created shadows.
Once created,
they do not go away.
From the
earliest times our primitive ancestors knew something that we, in our arrogance
had forgotten. Myth, story, religion, all were devised by wise men to pass on this
primordial message. We came to believe
that these tales were allegorical; we lost sight of the literal truth. Mankind needs
light to survive.
Throughout the
whole of civilisation we had used light to drive them away. As science
progressed, we developed better and better ways of lighting our world and we
forgot them, dismissed them.
But they were
only driven off, not destroyed. They receded, resentful, like circus tigers
before a whip, but like the tigers they waited for a moment’s inattention. They
lurked, just out of sight, waiting, watching, serried ranks of patient
malevolence, distorted phantasms, cruel parodies of our symmetry, biding their
time. Once the light died, they returned. When the electricity failed, millions
died, overwhelmed by the sentient darkness, a flood tide no longer held back by
our artificial defences.
Darkness is the
natural order of things.
Here, now, in
the flickering, guttering embers of my last fuel, I know the truth. Just beyond
sight, they wait for me.
Hungry for my
soul.
‘the earth was without form, and void; and darkness was upon the face of the deep.’
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@nickjohns999
This story was written from a prompt in the Inspiration Monday Challenge
Oooo, fascinating, creepy take on creation. Love the mix of myth and science. The title alone is brilliant!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to InMon!
Thanks for looking in! Enjoyed the prompts, started three different stories - still developing the others, as they want to be longer!
ReplyDeleteAnother good one Nick, keep going!
ReplyDeleteSorry that last comment was me ;9) Still technically challenged as you can see, I meant to put from Barders
ReplyDeleteCheers Kid!
ReplyDeleteWelcome aboard!