“My Lord, here
are your guardsmen. Each is worthy of your trust and love. Every man here bears
a champion’s name and tales are told of their great renown. Families across the
land have welcomed them and feasted them on the hero’s portion. Our enemy’s men
tremble and their women frighten children with the mere mention of their names.
Here is Einon ap
Geraint, called the Anvil. He stood against their vanguard in the first rush of
their charge. They swarmed and swooped in numbers like starlings roosting on a
summer evening, but they broke against him as waves against a rocky shore.
Here is Brynmor
ap Idris, the Mountain. He slew the enemy’s champion, Grimm the Kinslayer, who boasted
that his spear was a gift from their Gods. In that mighty struggle Brynmor took
the first thrust from the spear in order to lay hands upon the warrior. With arms rippling like oaken boughs, he
lifted the enemy high above his head then threw him down, breaking his back as
the earth trembled and shook with the impact. He cut off the Kinslayer’s head and
broke the spear across his knee.
Here is your
captain Cadfan, the Battle Raven. In the heat of the fight, his flame shone and
dazzled like the setting Sun. He carved a path of blood to their Prince and none
could stand against him. Alone at last he faced the royal guard, who fell to
his fell sword like ripe corn falls before a scythe, and great was the
slaughter of his passing and worthy of song.
The last man
here is best known to you. Maldwyn, named Brave Friend, whose butchered body we
found shielding yours, broken sword in hand, faithful even to his last breath.
These warriors
are the brightest and the best of our people. Each of these mighty men, sworn
to defend you, and oath breakers none, now travels with you, in death as they
did in life, as you begin your next journey. The wood of your pyre burns
fitfully, gathered at night from land still wet with the blood of your enemies.
Broken weapons surround you, Arthmael, last Lord of the Cymru, but your hand
still holds your royal sword.
Your people have
dire need of you, and your champions, against an enemy that lays waste to our
homes and families. May your coming be as swift as the next Sun’s rising. The
smoke bearing your spirit rises and turns toward the setting Sun. So, until
your return, we will sing our songs and look to the West.
430 words
@nickjohns999
This story was written for Jeff Tsuruoka's Mid-Week Blues Buster #35 and was inspired by this week's song - 'I Am Going To The West' by Connie Dover
It was awarded second place in the contest.
Judge Anna Loy (@ruanna3) said:-
2nd place: Nick Johns
I loved the voice in this piece – it was strong and evoked a very mythic mood. I also enjoyed the Welsh flavour with the names and the storytelling. I really wanted to know about this world. It had a definite “Morte D’Arthur” feel.
It was awarded second place in the contest.
Judge Anna Loy (@ruanna3) said:-
2nd place: Nick Johns
I loved the voice in this piece – it was strong and evoked a very mythic mood. I also enjoyed the Welsh flavour with the names and the storytelling. I really wanted to know about this world. It had a definite “Morte D’Arthur” feel.
This enthralls me and sends shivers down my spine. Here in West wales, I can see everything you wrote! Perfect wording for great heroes!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa - it's my Welshness coming out. There is a wonderful Welsh word 'Hiraeth'. It has no English literal translation, but means something like, 'a melancholy, wistful, even doomed, longing for your home and roots' I occasionally catch faint echoes of it in some of my writing, even when this is unintended.
DeleteJeff Hollar used 'Hiraeth' in a Monday Mixer a while ago...I was so chuffed!
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