She waited,
trembling, for them to call his name. Or hers.
The sweat stained Mayor picked a folded slip, passed it to David to read out.
The sweat stained Mayor picked a folded slip, passed it to David to read out.
“David Osborne.”
He crushed it.
Dropped it. It rolled to a stop against her foot.
He strode to the
hatch, his body no longer warming the space next to her. She felt the impossibly
small drop in temperature. But the hairs on her arm bristled for a different reason.
***
“Come on, Em.
Don’t be like this. It’s what we’ve worked for all this time.”
“What you’ve
worked for, David.”
He yawned, popping
his ears. Equalising the pressure of the descent, she knew, but she couldn’t
let the chance pass.
“Sorry, am I
boring you? At least you can listen now you are in the same room as me.”
“Em, I’m not...”
“...Not what? Not
tired from spending all night out... again? Not wishing it wasn’t me here with
you?”
His eyes
flashed, cold and dangerous like the darkening water surrounding them.
“That’s not fair
and you know it! There were a million details to settle recently. Who was going
to sort them out – you?”
“...and why not?
We started this project together. I know every inch of the design, even if it’s
your brainchild. ‘You’re not just a pretty face are you?’ You used to say that when
I surprised you knowing about the schematics Well, it seems that just a pretty
face was all you were really interested in – once I got your funding lined up.
We are – were – a team, David.”
“There’s no ‘I’
in team, Emma.”
“Is that the
best you’ve got...?”
“... but there
is a ‘me’, isn’t there? If you twist it. The way you twist everything.”
He took a step
towards me then stopped. He drew a deep ragged breath. He exhaled as if more
air came out than went in. His shoulders sagged, deflated, defeated.
“Whatever. I’m
going to glad-hand the VIPs. You have the conn.”
The hatch
closed, leaving me alone and still fuming. That was quicker than I expected. He
gave in too easily now. You can’t fight properly unless you get in close, and
we got so close we swore we’d never be apart.
Who was he close
to now, I wondered. I wiped my eyes with my coverall sleeve, making a note to check
the humidity later.
My hand hovered
over the button. Was I really ready for this?
Hell yes! I slammed
the button and held on. We lurched, our descent speed increasing rapidly.
I flicked the
tannoy. “Emergency buoyancy loss! Brace for impact! Brace for impact!”
We hit bottom
hard.
The VIPs had bickered,
but it was obvious. David or I had to man the escape pod.
Two names in the
helmet. Let fate decide.
***
The sub rocked
as the pod launched with a whoosh.
She had almost
emptied the air tanks in it. No chance of making the surface.
She retrieved
the crumpled slip. Unravelled it.
‘Emma Osborne’
500 words
@nickjohns999
This story was written for Alissa Leonard’s FinishThat Thought Flash Fiction Challenge #11
The story was judged the WINNER of the Judge's Challenge Category of the contest.
Judge Rebekah Postupak said:-
The story was judged the WINNER of the Judge's Challenge Category of the contest.
Judge Rebekah Postupak said:-
WINNERS:
Judge's Challenge: @NickJohns999.
While I'm not sure why the POV switched from 3rd to 1st person midway,
the abyss of deep water is pivotal to this story's central crisis and
also serves as a stark metaphor of David & Emma's lethally
destructive relationship. In the tradition of Stephen King, "Abyss" is
utterly tragic and utterly terrifying; and it is utterly inseparable
from its watery setting. It's a powerful and full-bodied use of the
challenge, deserving of the challenge title.
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