Wednesday, 27 March 2013

What Lies Beneath

What Lies Beneath

“Control, This is Alpha One. Has the Strike Team responded?”


“Roger. The remotes we dropped below aren’t registering. We’re going in after them.”

“That’s not advised.”

“Raising the access panel..... Damn!”


“Control. The concrete panel has bizarre marks.”


“Wait one....Oh Jesus!”

“Steady Mister”

“Control... They’re teeth marks!.... What’s that?... “

“Alpha One?....”

55 words


This story was written for Lisa McCourt-Hollar's 55 Word Challenge and received an Honourable Mention from the judge

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